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Thanks for the great review and feedback! I definitely agree with a lot of those points. This edit is ~3 years old now and I’d do some things differently now, so when I get back to re-editing my ideas I’ll be making many of the changes you suggested.
Is Luke still alive somehow in the universe of this fan edit?
“No one is ever really gone”. You’ll see Luke in a different life by the end, but no, he is not still physically alive after the end. I made these edits in a One Canon/Crucible Canon in mind (https://boards.theforce.net/threads/the-crucible-canon-merging-eu-and-new-canon-as-smoothly-as-possible.50053287/), so while in Disney Canon TRoS takes place in 35 ABY when Luke isn’t yet so old, my film takes place in 65 ABY after all of the Legends storylines, leaving Luke, Leia, and Han to pass away in their 80s-90s here.