The reviews on the web (MR, Reddit, here) are great so far!!! The experiment consisting in rearranging the continuity, fixing the pacing by cutting down some dialogues and scenes, and center the story around Sol to make a classical tragedy structure seem to bear fruits. People here, on MR and Reddit leave fantastic comments and a few gave me some feedback which allowed me to improve some parts. Thank you everyone! I will be distributing links for a few days, but soon my official work will take over! And I’ll be less responsive. Sry in advance.