If you or someone else wants to provide a different voice for them, I’m sure we can figure something out. Otherwise I think the current version matches the aesthetic that Hal put together in Ascendant. Yeah, it’s similar to Kylo’s voice; but so are the costumes themselves.
As for adding an additional shot… I’d love to feature them more; but it’s tricky, considering they’re in probably about 25 seconds of the entire film, and most of that footage wouldn’t really lend itself to being moved here.
However… maybe this shot could work?