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Post #1601800

Author
Grand Admiral Thrawn
Parent topic
The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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Date created
2-Aug-2024, 11:54 PM

DZ-330 said:

Just thinking…

  • Redo Poe’s Illum line
  • Maybe cleanup/redo Finn’s: “It’s the First Order, they’ve found us line.”
  • An angry line for Poe about making the First Order pay after the destruction of the Hosnian System (helping to explain why they are continuing the assault)
  • Potential line for Lor San Tekka (or Kylo) clarifying that it isn’t a map that Luke left to find him, but a map that leads to an ancient Jedi Temple where Luke may be, clearing up the confusion on why Luke would leave a map if he didn’t want to be found.
  • Maybe some kind of line before Rey leaves to find Luke about starting an evacuation soon because the First Order is coming to D’Qar to counterattack.
  • Any Leia exposition lines that could be on comms during the Starkiller X-Wing battle?
  • A Maz Kanata line about having to leave soon to go settle a union dispute (TLJ connection)
  • Over the loudspeaker at the Resistance base in the background “Rose Tico, please report to maintenance.”

Bumping this…