I very much have enjoyed all of these edits as they’ve improved with each version. The only thing I think might not age that well is they may imply in the new Rey movie that Kylo’s spirit literally lives inside of her, hence why he doesn’t have a Force ghost at the end. It’s possible.
I could also see that as a possibility. I mean, that’s at least what the early leaks concerning the Rey movie claimed - that Rey would be pregnant with another set of Skywalker twins, and one of them would turn to the dark side. But I think they scrapped most of that script. Who knows, some of that material might be repurposed, though.
Btw, I made the lines for Luke based upon my last post here already. Just wanted to see if there was any interest. Otherwise, I’ll save it for my special edition of this edit.