Hi g00b, I watched Spark of the Rebellion and I really liked it, I already like the Rebels characters and plot but your edit really enchanced it with the intro, high quality recolor, cuts, etc. The only thing I didn’t like , and which IMO was a problem in TCWR also, are the transitions. The transition from the Inquisitor´s introduction to Ezra in the roof seemed to me kind of abrupt with the change in music, and the transition from Tarkintown to Lothal has a establishing shot of the city which seems too brief (although I don’t remember if the original had it like that). They are little details but the took me out a bit from the experience.
Perhaps in the first another establishing shot of Lothal could be added, to give more time for the music to transition more smoothly, and in the second case, simply slowing the shot would make the transition flawless, I think.
EDIT: I also wanted to say that now I watched until episode 5 and it has been a really good experience, I particularly enjoyed the Empire Day episode. I didn’t encounter any other super obvious edited transition yet.