Hello there! š French Canadian yes (which explain my bad English lol)
I might compile every alteration Iāve made⦠Quite a lot, but essentially for story purposes (I have Even used sound tracks from the series to smooth some new transitions). I really decided to focus on Solās guilt⦠I let the first kung-fu scene without some cringy lines (yes my child⦠Attack me bla-bla-bla lol), introduce the mystery sith figure and then to the « 16years earlierĀ Ā», a sequence a decided early on to merge some of the ep3 and 7. Like this we know early on in the story that the jedi messed up when Mama is « maybeĀ Ā» killed BANG I jump 16 years later with a calm Sol. But how is he going to deal with that event?? I think it is much more interesting emotionally then to keep too much informations from the audience, so much that we canāt invest with them and understand their personnal arc⦠for that reason I mostly cut Mae in the first part and Osha is already in custody (well sheās in the ship before the crash - I cut the actual crash as well lol)⦠I canāt wait to see how Iām gonna cut in the final episode! To be continued
Post #1599248
- Author
- MathisMando
- Parent topic
- The Acolyte Corcoran Cut
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- Date created
- 16-Jul-2024, 9:23 AM