Man I really like this edit…maybe even more than the Shroud of the Dark Side edit. It flows so well and pretty much all the cringe is gone (I still can’t stand “I tRuLy DeEpLy LoVe YoU” but you handled it well). The beginning of the film is handled so well and the inclusion of the training scene from Kenobi fits perfectly. The dialogue and pace is so much better.
Now, I will say that the entire ending moves a little too quickly with everything between Yoda and Dooku being removed. Feels like it goes from the battle to everyone back on Coruscant in a matter of seconds. I remember the ending of Shroud of the Dark Side feeling pretty well paced, but I’ll have to revisit that one. The only thing that was pretty jarring for me was the quality of some parts of the deleted scenes. I know they are what they are but the added film grain made them that much more distracting.
Overall well done!