Right, so in an update to this, I’ve had a few exciting new ideas, but I’m half-way through my current draft and to implement them would mean ditching what I have, so I may just make two versions and then determine through test audiences which is better.

In the meantime, the last scene of the first draft is more or less complete, so if anyone would like to preview that bit and give it feedback, feel free to PM me.

Just remember, it’s only the ending, not the full film, and it’s very brief, most of it is taken up by the credits