Looks good. Only thing I see that I don’t know will work is Ron not leaving - there’s no way to really explain why he doesn’t go to Godric’s Hollow with them.
Post #1591628
- Author
- nightstalkerpoet
- Parent topic
- Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows: The Exodus Edition (a WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1591628/action/topic#1591628
- Date created
- 23-May-2024, 12:23 AM