Well, the line you’re describing is the original one, so I guess I’m confused whether or not that’s the one you prefer. If it is, that’s the one Hal went with for v5 mostly because he doesn’t have a problem with the way it’s phrased. I’m not completely determined to change it in this edit, either, so if there are some people that don’t want it changed for some reason I’m willing to oblige for that.
Post #1591262
- Author
- Jar Jar Bricks
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant Special Edition (WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1591262/action/topic#1591262
- Date created
- 20-May-2024, 9:04 AM