Well, the weather ruined my plans for tonight so I’m back at it with a test of the first scene:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1iRZ11y9vo9utoC7GwkTSROIXGifGEu3m/view?usp=sharing

To be clear, “What’re you most afraid of?” also had to be changed because Mark’s original delivery doesn’t emphasize “you” enough. Also, my intention is to exclude the “Final lesson” line from v4 because I personally think congruency with TLJ takes priority over a fan-servicey line that references TLJ. I also just prefer the more personable “Rey… some things are stronger than blood.”