I’ve gone ahead and generated a bunch of lines and selected the best three for the following compilation:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1r5CNyHhP6QBsg1zUK9eJEm9X6du9UYi5/view?usp=sharing

This is the same dialogue as we originally came up with since it doesn’t seem like anybody has any issues with it. I can provide the three lines individually to Hal if we are okay with these takes or I can create alternatives for some (or all) of them. Here is how they get separated:

But Leia feared the hatred that consume our father…
Choosing instead to follow our mother’s path…
Despite losing everything, and everyone, Leia always chose compassion over hatred.

EDIT: Oh, and here is a new version of “Leia sensed it as she trained you”. I think what was missing was that sort of gruffness he has when he says “Because you’re a Palpatine.”

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qZ78eOdnarLFW2k0_QMknTQcctbgPgCN/view?usp=sharing

After looking at that scene, it doesn’t look like “She still trained me” can be removed. So either we have to deal with the slight repetition there or there’s some other line I can’t think of.