Correct. But what I gave Hal actually includes that line as you have it. The problem is that he’s speaking so slow that there isn’t enough time to fit it all comfortably. He’d have to start talking sooner than he does in the original film. I think I just need to generate it all again with a slightly faster pace.
But if we were to make adjustments to the writing, now would be the time to discuss them before I generate anything.