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Post #1583320

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Jar Jar Bricks
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The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
24-Mar-2024, 3:59 PM

Remind me, did we already decide on if Leia’s “Come home” line was going to be incorporated? And also this test right here could bring more life to her character

Luke’s dialogue over the Leia flashback may also need some minor adjustments if we are able to nail down your first bullet point. At the very least, I’d recommend making the following change - adjust the order of the lines Luke gives Rey immediately after the flashback.

This is the way we currently have it - “A thousand generations live in you, now. We’ll always be with you. But this is your fight.”

This is the way it should be to avoid the clunky feeling it currently has - "A thousand generations live in you now. (Staying onscreen with Luke) But this is your fight. Some sort of line here that replaces “You’ll take both sabers to Exegol” This way we avoid a slow-mo effect on the shot of Rey.

EDIT: Lines I’d recommend for that spot - “Leia’s legacy will guide you on Exegol” or something generic like “Leia believed in your strength” / “A fight you can still win.”