The Armorer Convo is getting close.
The beginning of line regarding the fallen Forge being her grave is not clearly audible I think. (The first 2 or 3 words), but the conversation itself flows nicely now in my opinion.
Sweet, yeah the line reads themselves aren’t the goal yet, some sound good and can be used but some are just placeholders until I find the actual dialogue script writing to finalize and then I’ll generate 100 different takes until it makes a read that I like. I’ll wait for another review on the writing itself before trying to finish up all the audio quality.
With the Mando scene in Tattoine a few exchanges sound tonally disconnected. If you happen to have a script for that as a basis, I could toss some ideas around. 😃
Keep in mind that on this scene we are a bit more limited as some of the lines have to match Fennec’s mouth movements well enough to not cause a distraction. The show itself dubs over people on many occasions and not every viewer notices it as they try to disguise it, but it has to be done in a way that feels at least somewhat natural.
P: Well…How is it?
D: Purring like a Loth cat.
P: Oh, hey Grandpa…
D: I’m here on business.
P: Oh, are the Hutts back? You checking on Boba Fett?
D: Actually, I am looking for him.
P: Boring! Oh, by the way an old friend of yours dropped by. Said she was looking for you.
D: A friend of mine?
P: Don’t worry, I told her I didn’t know where you were then I locked her out and engaged The Hanger security system.
D: She tell you her name?
F: Fennec Shand!
P: I thought you said that the hanger security system was up? Don’t get away from me you come right back here…
D: Fennec Shand.
F: By any chance are you looking for work?
D: This is an unexpected surprise.
F: I was looking for you.
D: What is this bag of credits for?
F: A job offer. We need help dealing with the Pykes.
D: I was hoping to talk with Boba about Mandalore.
F: I’m sure he would consider it.
D: You can keep the credits. Tell him it’s on the house, but also tell him that I’m going to need a favor from him in return.
The Star Tours easteregg is not too obvious, had to listen to it twice to actually get it.
Perfect! That’s just how an easter egg should be placed.