I have not watched season 3, so some of that is going over my head, but on the other hand, having not watched it I think it gives me a good perspective.
Oh, interesting! That does give a very unique perspective for analysis here. Yeah, you might be confused by the discussion as you’re jumping into one of the final scenes from that movie here, but you’ll be a good judge of if it makes sense in a vacuum.
First off, assuming a lot or most of those Armorer lines are AI… they sound really good. And the dialogue itself from her I think sounds well written.
Yes, 100% AI there. I’ve rewritten some more in a draft #2 I’ll share below.
Bo Katan’s responses, I assume from the real show in a different context, something sounds a little off, it doesn’t quite sound like she is responding to what the Armorer is stating. There is a different emotional level, I can tell the context is different there. But to be honest, if I was just watching the movie I probably wouldn’t notice it much.
Yes, maybe it was a little bit off. I’ve tried to use Dimitrios’ suggested structure this time around which should hopefully make her reactions feel more natural.
I tried a few things here, primarily to gibe additional reasoning to the armorers decision to choose this moment to make a helmet exception
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Thanks! Some of that isn’t totally possible to use in its entirety as I’m limited by the available timing between the real lines, but I’ve uploaded a new preview to combine some of your ideas with a little rewrite on my end as well. Let me know what you think! Bo-No-Helmet Demo 2
Also working on a Fennec AI model to help as well, so give me some feedback here if you don’t mind. Almost all of Din’s lines are generated as well. Fennec AI Model test
And finally, I’m trying to go all out to make this last film full of little legends references and really want to let some creativity shine here. So I have tossed in a bunch of fun easter eggs throughout, here’s just one example of something in the background soundtrack: Easer Eggs Galore