Thanks for the discussion and ideas! I made a quick first draft of some dialogue based on the ideas above. Try not to get distracted by the lack of audio mixing/soundtrack and background noise balancing/couple wonky ai generations, I don’t want to spend hours on all that only to need to change a bunch of it anyway, so focus solely on the writing of the lines themselves.
Does the writing itself hold up here and provide a sensible reason for why Bo-Katan is chosen to “wall both worlds”?