TheDimitrios said:
That was quick.
The dialogue still needs some tweaking, but overall I,think it works!
Yeah, I think as a proof of concept it has a lot of potential to fix the problems I had with this scene. I’ll just have to spend no less than 15 hours audio-mixing everything once I lock in the dialogue… But it could be worth it. Here’s the full written script if anyone wants to make edits to it:
"BK: You wished to see me?
A: This place was once the heart of our strength. Now it serves as a reminder of our vulnerability… You once sought to reclaim Mandalore from the clutches of our enemies.
BK: That dream has never died.
A: Our history is a tapestry of triumph and tragedy woven by the hands of leaders who understood the way. It is said that a true leader can endure the Gaze of a Mythosaur and emerge unscathed, their eyes reflecting the beast’s Spirit. You claim to have seen a Mythosaur. A claim as bold as it is rare… Prove it. Remove your helmet.
BK: But…?
A: If your eyes hold the truth then you shall lead us, but deceit will make this Fallen Forge your tomb. To claim such an encounter is to assert a connection to the very soul of Mandalore. It is to claim a right to leadership, to the guiding of our scattered people back to unity.
BK: This is the Way.
A: The punishment for deceit is not simply death, it is Scorn. The erasure of your name from our history and the declaration of your lineage as traitors to Mandalore.
BK: I understand.
A: Then look into my eyes and let me see the depth of your claim. Reveal Your Spirit to me here and now and face your destiny… Don’t show me your eyes, show me her spirit… You stand on a precipice, Bo-Katan. Show me now or everything you have ever bled for will be forgotten.
[Music, scene change]
A: Brothers and sisters! Mando’ade! Gather around, anade. Bo-Katan Kryze is going off to bring other Mandalorians in exile to us so that we may be one people again.
PV: But she shows her face…
A: The Mythosaur has fixed her gaze upon Bo-Katan. She has been chosen to walk both worlds. (The Spirit of the Mythosaur IS her helmet now.) (The burden of this responsibility has been placed on Bo-Katan’s back.) To liberate our people from the past… And to restore our future… So that our children will know the glory of the Way. (We shall return to Mandalore as one people!) We are going home.
Darth Sadifous said:
Look in my eyes, what do you see? A cult of…
Damnit… I knew I forgot something, I didn’t include the guitar riff in the background.
Sorry, I actually like this idea a lot and adds more weight to her taking the mythosaur pauldron as well. I too was not happy with the writing in season three with it feeling like the armorer (possible turncoat) was setting Bo up for failure, only to never pay off on that. I do question how the armorer knows for sure if Bo saw the mythical creature or not by just looking into her eyes though. Overall though, I cannot wait to see what everything looks like polished. You are doing a great job; keep up the amazing work!
Great, thanks for your thoughts. I think it’s been shown that the Armorer has steeped herself in Mandalorian history to the point of being somewhat of an Oracle of the clan. They follow her every word as she keeps the Way perfectly, and mysticism has always existed with the people of Mandalore and their dedication to their homeworld. The Mythosaur itself is a being that is seemingly attuned to the ebb and flow of life/the force. It is a plausible idea that it can “imprint” upon someone in a way that such an Oracle could “see”. Or maybe it is all total bullshit and the Mandalorian clan is indeed just a cult, but that’s the fun of it all. That’s how most of the galaxy perceives Mandalorians in the first place.
I’ll keep working on other parts of the films while we sort through some edits here, but I think this is a worthwhile task overall.