Community Request!

Just want to try something together here, so as I have a very solid Armorer AI model, I’ve been looking into altering her explanation of why Bo-Katan is suddenly allowed to remove her helmet. I found the original D+ reasoning to be quite unsatisfactory and left me feeling confused about the Armorer’s intentions, leading many viewers to think she was an Imperial spy/traitor. All that fizzled out though and it just happened to be poor writing. I want to change that!

Does anyone want to take a crack at rewriting the dialogue in that scene on Nevarro in the forge where Bo-Katan speaks with the Armorer? This originally occurs in S03E05 ~31-34 minutes. Bo-Katan really doesn’t get a chance for many lines here, so we have to work around her reactions and dialogue, but we have a great opportunity to rewrite the Armorer’s reasoning. If any of you are writers and want to try your hand here, I’d love to see it. If you aren’t comfortable writing a full word-for-word script, then feel free just to leave your overall thoughts on some improved reasoning.

This scene takes place at the end of my upcoming Book 5 edit, and I want it to really tie into Book 6 as well so we want to have a sensible plot thread going on. Feel free to ask questions about the upcoming story if it would help too. I have a drafted scene written already, but I want to compare it with some of what you all might have in your heads. Feel free to post here or DM me your scripts!