Acbagel, I am excited to see what you are cooking up. I love this series and your passion! I expect the final product to be nothing short of spectacular.
Definitely my most creative work yet! Goes a bit back to my earlier books in terms of over structure, this book 6 reminds me a bit of Book 2/3.
Interested to see how the removal of the mod & krrsantan recruitments goes. I did not have an issue with them in your last edit. It was just how the water monger’s complaint lead to the recruitment of the wookie that seemed a bit of a logical leap. Also, I wasn’t the biggest fan of the Hutt Twins intro in the show as it lead ultimately to a nothing burger in the original serries, so I will be interested to see how their intergration in this edit has meaning.
I just think the recruitment scenes are a bit unnecessary when you aren’t showing Boba’s rise and how he’s trying to build from scraps. We jump into his storyline ~6-8 months after we last saw him, so he’s already got a decent power structure. And the mods play such a small overall part with only a couple lines anyway, I think it easily presents as that they’re just his bodyguards. Same with krrsantan, he’s more of an easter egg character that’s working for Boba in the background.
The Hutts will be the cause that delays Boba from helping on Mandalore in full force. All I’ll say is that the underworld and the imperial remnant will be in cahoots.