While I am reviewing the project… did you say that the Zorri lines could not be gotten how you would want them? Does that mean you don’t think the changes to Poe’s backstory would work?

And do you think we could still try a line for Kylo Ren to suggest that the dagger “revealed” her parents’ fate to Rey? (The line should not be this verbose, but the idea is the dagger is not her parents’ murder weapon but a dark side relic that shows people things because… reasons.)

EDIT: Actually, the line about Skywalker sounds really good! I see what you mean about the voice modulation, but at least for an isolated line that takes place not in close-up, I don’t think it’s a problem. So that line works, in any event!