Yeah, in my version, Rey hurting Finn factors into her decision to run away; but also because I have Leia sacrificing herself to save Ben (from Rey’s wound), Leia now dies fixing Rey’s mistake. Rey is now (indirectly) responsible, because she can’t control her anger.
As for Ahch-To, my current script is:
LUKE: What are you [so] afraid of?
REY: Myself. Leia’s gone, and it’s my fault.
LUKE: Leia sensed your spirit, your heart…
What would you recommend for the Leia lines? Bear in mind that most of it is dialogue splicing, so we’re limited on what she can actually say. (I tried AI lines, but most of them didn’t sound great.)
Why do you think the last line doesn’t work? Personally, I like how it shows Leia’s unwavering belief in her son. And also, by focusing on him instead of Rey in that moment, I think it also helps to push Rey’s shame a little more.
I don’t know, I feel like she should say something at the end, rather than just going limp.