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Post #1578867

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Jar Jar Bricks
Parent topic
The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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Date created
18-Feb-2024, 4:33 PM

I think the second line’s delivery is perfect, but the first can definitely be improved. Unfortunately, the second one kinda needs to have improved wording in order to bridge the two sentences together in a more understandable way:

Something like - “But Leia feared giving in to hatred like our father, choosing instead to follow our mother’s path. Yet Leia still lost everything in life. And everyone. Despite this, she always chose love.”