I do really like the “Ben, come home” line. It is subtle, but I think works and shows Leia despite all of “Kylo’s atrocities” still thinks her son can be redeemed. Something her husband literally laid his life down for as well. I think it is poetic and rhymes as Lucas would say. Also is mirrors Anakin’s redemption, both being too late to actually make amends for their trangressions due to the death of themselves or the ones that they love. Something very tragic in that.

Just my two cents, but AI has come such a long way in such a short time. Truly impressive work, Jar Jar Bricks! Ultimately this is Hal’s baby though and this edit has already given me much more love for an intially lackluster trilogy ending film than I thought possible so I will defer to Hal’s judgment in this home stretch.

PS: I still would love the inclusion of the Kylo/ Luke convo proposed in this edit to pay off TLJ “See you around, kid” line.