I don’t think I have anything helpful to add, but my old thread may be of interest: https://originaltrilogy.com/topic/Info-Wanted-Star-Wars-The-Temp-Track-/id/12014
Sweet thanks! I have a lot of sources for the temp track already (primarily JW Rinzler’s Making of Star Wars, and also Paul Hirsch’s autobiography), but I’d never seen several of the sources mentioned here, I’ll definitely examine them in more detail