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Post #1577691

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g00b
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Star Wars Rebels Recut - A Fanedit TV Series
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Date created
9-Feb-2024, 3:07 PM

I’m currently working on S02E10 Shroud of Darkness.

I’m recoloring and adjusting the sequences inside the Lothal Temple (to better match the changes I made in season 1).

https://youtu.be/YTyfQrPMba4

This is what I’ve come up with so far, I’d love to get some feedback or suggestions 😃

So far I’ve

  • desaturated and recolored the scenes between Kanan and the Inquisitor. Given how bright the light Kanan walks into is, it felt odd the original scene was saturated like every other scene… it’d surely be washed out from the light? That’s my justification anyway.
  • redid the lightsabers. This combined with the recolor makes it much easier to track them through the scenes now, they got lost in the light of the original.
  • cut Kanan saying “a temple guard” as it’s just exposition for the audience that feels clunky.
  • cut Jedi temple guard posing for the camera ready to strike, he had already made his intentions to attack clear enough.
  • cut there initial fight a touch for pacing as there is no need for it to start up now then cut away to another scene.