I really don’t want this vision to be so rapid fire that you can’t even make out what is going on properly. Yeah, that might line up better with the original TROS, but there is definitely merit in making this more akin to Rey confronting her evil clone on the Death Star and also Luke’s own thing with Vader on Dagobah. There should be a mini story present there imo, with a beginning, middle, and end. And that includes allowing some build-up rather than jumping straight into things. I think the epileptic nature of TROS is something we should be actively avoiding in this case, not contributing further to.
Thanks for sharing that though. Apparently there is a shot with both Kylo and the mask in frame, which I had no idea existed because I haven’t watched original TROS in ages.
I think a good middle ground here would be to intersperse those shots of Kylo and the mask throughout the vision better. Currently, it’s only at the part where he’s hoisted up in the air. This might add to the “snappy” nature that you seem interested in.