I like this creative incorporation of the fan film into Kylo’s vision. I would only suggest to add an extra saber exchange that’s more energetic. As a viewer, that tiny touch of adrenaline and energy gets the engagement which will unravel the dialogue and take home meaning you intend to portray.
Post #1576512
- Author
- jadenkorr41
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant Special Edition (WIP)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1576512/action/topic#1576512
- Date created
- 1-Feb-2024, 6:35 PM