Maybe the pause before “What are you most afraid of?” would be less necessary if you change the intonation so that the stress is on “you”. Then Luke would talk about HIS fears before asking Rey about HERS.
This is definitely an option.
Post #1576222
- Author
- Jar Jar Bricks
- Parent topic
- The Rise of Skywalker: Vader's Legacy Edition (WIP)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1576222/action/topic#1576222
- Date created
- 30-Jan-2024, 4:40 PM