Okay, I’ve put together all of Ahch-To into one so we can see if the central theme I’m trying to convey is clear enough:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/16wFmlYAhO-2QaMZtzTL72XxxMYKDjmf_/view?usp=sharing

EDIT: I’ve changed out “Because you’re a Palpatine?” for a delivery that is more clearly meant to be a question. It uses the same intonation as Anakin saying “Because of Obi-Wan?” from ROTS. But I might swap this out again as I tinker with things as I feel like it’s not fully there in that delivery.