“You’re just Palpatine.”
“I am your own fear.”
They fight briefly, and Kylo loses badly.
“It is no wonder your mind dwells on this forest… You are unworthy!”
I like the idea behind this dialogue, especially with the implementation of the fanfilm, but it seems a bit clunky imo. If I may suggest:
“You’re not him. Just another trick.”
“I am your own fear, Ben.”
Fight
“Your mind dwells on your failure. The scavenger bested you. You are unworthy.”