Honestly I’d probably just remove Palpatine’s line at the start, I’m not a huge fan of how it makes Snoke seem like a straight up meat puppet for Palpatine instead of his own autonomous character that Palpatine and his followers engineered. It also makes a bit more sense for Kylo to go and pray to the Vader mask if he didn’t just find out that Palpatine is screwing with him through it. Will probably do that for my personal cut.
Post #1574987
- Author
- hinventon
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant Special Edition (WIP)
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- Date created
- 22-Jan-2024, 7:23 PM