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Post #1574647

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PsyGemini
Parent topic
Star Wars Rebels Recut - A Fanedit TV Series
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Date created
21-Jan-2024, 5:02 AM

S03x03 - Maul

I LOVED how you merged those three eps together, the story does flow quite nicely as one piece!

  • The two transitions are a little rough however, specially from the first to the second episode. Maybe some random scene from a cut episode (just them flying in space for about five seconds) could help with a little breath.

  • 28:30-28:50 - could maybe cut this and improve the pace? They JUST told they were tracking and going to follow Ezra anyway, don’t need two scenes in a row stating the same point.

  • 43:44. Cut this “Maul’s back” since the story is in pretty much one go now?

  • 44:30. Cut the “I wanna go to Tatooine” line? Makes no sense, how does Ezra all of a sudden even know about Tatooine? I know he just goes there in the next scene anyway, but that we can infer that was just the following of Maul’s voice/presence.

  • Also, the third part could REALLY be trimmed down considerably, there’s just so much uninteresting filler in here,
    the whole ezra+chopper shenanigans feels kind of out of place for such an important lore episode.

  • And maybe cut Ezra getting back to his friends? The end here is beyond rushed, Kanan doesn’t even ask about Obi-wan, what the hell. So just leaving it out could actually be a better narrative, you know, leaving to the viewers how the characters debated what happened down there.