I think the “We’ve become a dyad line” sounds good, I probably wouldn’t notice if I didn’t know. Might be worth it just to see how it sounds, and if it doesn’t work, the original is still ok.
Post #1574345
- Author
- hinventon
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- The Starlight Project Addendum: The Rise of Skywalker (Freeform Brainstorming Session)
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- Date created
- 18-Jan-2024, 6:13 PM