The reason I never bothered with that line is because she needs to say the line in a very specific way. Somewhat under her breath, whilst she’s simultaneously out of breath and exerting herself, and in a forceful and powerful way. I honestly wouldn’t rely on AI for any line that is supposed to represent a character’s entire journey. Stuff like exposition and that works, but when it’s something people will be scrutinizing I’d rather not bother with it.
If you have ideas for some other lines that can be improved I’ll give them a look. For example, I already re-did “He’s too dangerous” but without a v5 of Ascendant in the foreseeable future that will never see the light of day.