That looks solid for Rey Nobody! Is that what you’re referencing?
But for our idea here, these two sentences are integral and I refuse to change them “Palpatine influenced the Force itself into creating life. First my grandfather, and then you.” I think I’ve managed to make it quite clear in the last draft that her destiny is to rule, so whether that’s by Kylo’s side to make something new or as Palpatine’s Sith heir, it’s what she’s ultimately afraid of and seeking to overcome. In other words, her vision doesn’t need to be referenced again in the reveal scene because it’s already been established.
EDIT: Thanks to you though, I’ve finally found wording I like for Kylo’s line - “Luke saw the same fate in me. Only together can we make our own.”