At least in my lexicon, “lore” refers to books and supplementary material like comics.
Like I said, I’m willing to hear some alternatives for the paragraph after the heroes capture. What you had in your last draft is too short. Then I could reimplement the part about their paths being intertwined. But keep in mind that we’d still have Palpatine later claiming he never wanted her dead and also him sending Ochi to find a young Rey at some point.
EDIT: I just ripped the old one from previously in the thread since you aren’t providing me an option - “Palpatine knew your true potential… your power. The first time we fought, in the forest, the darkness inside of you awakened. You revealed yourself to the Emperor that day… just as he intended.”
I do also wonder if we could change Kylo’s line from earlier in the movie “Palpatine wants you dead” -> “Palpatine wants me to kill you”. This way we really lean into the idea that it’s not he specifically wants Rey dead, it’s just that she seems the least likely to claim his throne at this point.