Just chiming in to say, please don’t remove the Luke rescue from the end. No good can come of it. The edit is really good as is, so I don’t think anything more than minor tweaks are needed.
Regarding your Mandoverse edits, the only gripe I have is with your BoBF edit. It’s perfect except that the appended Luke training Grogu stuff is too drawn out. It should end with Din delivering the armor but not being allowed to see Grogu. The training montage et al plus Grogu’s choice should be at the beginning of your next episode.
I know you have your reasons for doing it your way, but imho, the flow and structure of a film is paramount, and having that bloated addendum just doesn’t flow.