True. I think the only line that feels weird with this version is Luke saying “Because you’re a palpatine?” I feel like he wouldn’t call Rey a Palpatine directly like that knowing he came from the same method of creation. So maybe we could change that to phrase it slightly differently.
Post #1573267
- Author
- hinventon
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- The Starlight Project Addendum: The Rise of Skywalker (Freeform Brainstorming Session)
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- Date created
- 10-Jan-2024, 5:26 PM