Nice suggestion. LotR is not my forte though, so someone else will have to get to work on that right away.As for the Anakin/Dooku exchange, I still believe inferring Padme’s death is not necessary. It’s been revealed to the Jedi Dooku was behind the assassination attempts all along, and that should be enough motive for Anakin to have a vendetta against him. It’d be great to incorporate something along the lines of:
Anakin: You’re the one who’s been trying to kill Padme all along. That’s the last mistake you’ll ever make, Dooku!
Dooku: Indeed.
Anakin’s line mirroring Luke’s to Jabba in RotJ, and it’s best to keep it simple for Dooku until we can find some suitable Lee dialogue.