I agree that this new version is the absolute best so far: it gives Rey an inextricable connection to Palpatine while also completely avoiding any contradictions with TLJ (something I didn’t even think was possible). There are a few minor issues I have with it, though, so here’s a revised take:

“I pushed you in the desert because I needed to see it… I needed you to see it… who you are. The dark side is your birthright, Rey…”
“You’re lying.”
“I’d never lie to you. Your parents were no one. Junk traders expecting a child they never wanted.”
“Don’t!”
“You were such a miracle, Rey… born of a virgin…”
“I don’t want this!”
“…just like Vader.”
“No!”
“You’ve seen it, haven’t you? Your destiny.”
(Rey sees the vision of herself on the Sith throne)
“Luke saw the same fate in me. But you and I don’t want it.”
“Stop talking.”
“Why? I know you better than anyone else.”
(Cutaway to heroes capture)
“Palpatine knew your true potential… your power. The first time we fought, in the forest, the darkness inside of you awakened. You revealed yourself to the Emperor that day… just as he intended.”
(Visions of Rey beating Kylo on Starkiller, falling into the dark cave, etc.)
“No!”
(The mask of Vader falls to the ground)
“So that’s where you are.”
“Before you joined the Jedi, Palpatine wanted you alive. I’ll come tell you why.”
“Rey… I know the rest of our story.”
“Tell me.”
"The Emperor manipulated the Force itself into creating life. First my grandfather, and then you. You’re his chosen heir… a rightful Palpatine.”
"The Emperor wants us to fight each other, so his strongest heir can rule. But he doesn’t realize the strength of our connection, Rey… a bond more powerful than life itself. We’ll end him and the Sith, and create a new order, together…”