Bobson Dugnutt’s edit touches up that specific shot a bit. Besides that, Hal’s prequel trilogy uses deleted scenes with more blatantly unfinished VFX regardless.
If nothing else, the scene confirms that he was actually well-versed in those Jedi texts. He wasn’t just bad-mouthing the Jedi, he’d clearly given it all a lot of thought. I’ve slotted it into your edit (along with the other deleted appearance of them) and it works great.