I’m proud of my rough draft posted earlier, but I like what you’re getting at with focusing more on the Skywalkers with the speaking time allowed to us. They are in the title of this movie, after all. Instead of Rey seeing visions of her parents, she could instead be seeing dark moments of the Skywalkers (Luke attacking Ben, Kylo killing Han, etc.) But we don’t want this to take away from Rey’s own backstory being filled in more. Also, I’d like to make it very clear that it’s still a bad idea for Palpatine to want Rey dead as a child if that wasn’t clear enough lol.