@littlev The problem is that you’re describing exactly why he’d want to keep her alive, not to kill her. There’s also no real character motivations involved. I still prefer Hal’s version which I modified and shared above.
Post #1571259
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- Jar Jar Bricks
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- The Rise of Skywalker: Ascendant (Released)
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- 28-Dec-2023, 6:09 PM