Could we also switch one line to:
“Rey…I learned what happened to them.”
Makes it more explicitly recent.
I’d still advocate for her parents “searching” for allies of Luke. They didn’t find them, but they were on the trail.
Post #1570682
- Author
- EddieDean
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- Unusual Sequel Trilogy Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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- Date created
- 23-Dec-2023, 7:17 PM