I am satisfied with the line from the second version. It replicates the way that Carrie whispers the best at the end of the line. I’ve done hundreds of generations and haven’t gotten a similar result anywhere else.
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1HJVzot6mTzlUYWbOqXKVzwsRvxk0UqrW?usp=sharing
Personally, if I had to pick between keeping this line or adding in the “come home” later on and using Sherlock’s v2 version of this scene (to prevent AI line overabundance), I’d probably prefer the latter. But it’s up to you.