Oh, I didn’t expect to see you here! I graciously thank you for your kindness and generousity in volunteering for my edit!
Here is the other take, where Vader says “they had just escaped our fighters” instead. I think I’m starting to grow on this take since it’s short and simple, whereas the other one was kinda lengthy, and the dead air kind of works because your eyes then gravitate towards Tarkin’s reaction afterwards.