Okay, I finally finished watching the edits. You might not like what I’m about to say, but I personally think that being honest is always the best option.

I have five main criticisms:

I think that the concepts behind the main story are good, very good in fact. The problem is, the alterations to the original source material are easily noticeable. I know it’s not your fault, and I know that you tried your best to save these movies, but they look too much like fan edits, so to speak. There are a lot of instances where you can tell that things were modified or cut, there are a lot of scenes that shouldn’t be in the place where you put them, etc. Again, I don’t blame you, you really tried to do your best, and I really appreciate it. But I think that, in order to make your vision come true in the best possible and realistic way, we should at least wait 10 more years, allow the technology to advance more, and allow us to create entire new scenes. It’s the only way we can save those movies.
You kept the original motivations that Luke had for going into exile. Yes, he didn’t try to kill Ben in his sleep, but he still went into exile for 20 years and cowardly refused to help his friends because Ben turned to the Dark Side. I don’t think it fits very well with Luke’s character, because Luke is not a hopeless person. In my opinion, it would have been better if you used AI technology to create new dialogue that implies that Luke went into exile because he wanted to find the first Jedi Temple, and wanted to be alone in order to meditate and understand what he did wrong, with the hope of fixing it later. Maybe you could have kept the original dialogue where he talks about the mistakes of the Jedi, but modifying it in order to make Luke say that the Jedi shouldn’t end, but should only be reformed (which is what his Legends counterpart did). Sure, he should feel guilty for Ben’s turn, but it should not be his only reason for going into exile.
During the confrontation between Kylo and Vader, you should have replaced their voices with AI generated voices. They don’t sound nothing like Adam Driver and James Earl Jones.
I personally think that it would have been better to use the classical Star Wars crawled for both movies. Sure, without the episodic title, but still with the crawl. Instead of showing flashbacks from other shows, I think it would have made more sense to use a crawl to explain what happened, who is Rey, etc.
Lastly, this is more of a nitpick criticism, but I personally think that naming Rey “Jaina” was pretty useless. It would have made more sense if her name was Rey and only Rey.

I hope you didn’t get offended by my criticisms, I’m only trying to be honest.