Here are my thoughts, ideas, and wonderings about V5 at this point.
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Mute a few lines right after the swirling Knights of Ren photoshoot, just to let things breathe a moment
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Including Rey reacting to Leia having known her dark heritage secret, but using a new line to imply she learned or sensed this sometime after TLJ
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Anything else we can do about the dagger? And I wonder about reinstating it being depicted as her parents’ murder weapon; it was removed to allow for greater clarity that it can mystically reveal directions to the wayfinder.
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Anyone else feel 3PO’s line “Terrible job, sir” was out of character? Wonder about maybe changing it to something like “Excellent job sir” … “Nobody’s perfect” or something. (Probably not.)
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3PO has one or two lines too many after the heroes fall underground. I’ll mute at least his last one of “we might still be.”
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New lines for Zorri Bliss to give Poe backstory of having worked undercover, and to contextualize the fighting on Kijimi as related to Luke’s inspiration
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And when arriving on Kijimi, I’d ideally like to replace some of the ‘Star Wars reference’ stormtrooper lines with lines that support the above recontextualization of the violence in the streets
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Any ideas for the short exchange between the stormtroopers and 3PO?